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Article Title:
Hope

The Doctor said "There's little Chance"
The Surgeon said "There's none"
The Pardre said "The best you can do is go and buy a gun"

"For it really is, for the best,
if you call yourself a friend."
But I can't choose what to do,
so you decide the end.

Total Rating 10
Number of Reviewers 3
Average Review ****

Name: marm...
Review: So here I sit with a gun for a bit In my shorts in the sun on the grass With the barrel of this riot gun Stuck firmly up my ass It’s a problem I should deal with Like Arnold Schwarzenegger But seeing as I’m just a two foot midget Who’s gonna’ pull the friggin trigger?
Rating:
*****

Name: Elaine W
Review: A padre recommending guns? He should be struck off! A midget helpline would be best, They won't joke or scoff.
Rating:
*****

Name: Grandpa John
Review: We could throw life away And live our last day Which just doesn’t seem very smart A second opinion’s a must Because whom can we trust Unless it comes straight from the heart Let’s tie a new hope At the end of our rope It might make us look like beginners But, if we take it in stride With nothing to hide We’ll end up being the winners
Rating:
Less than one star

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