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Fledgling
Press Limited
Registered in Scotland
No.208286
Can
You Write?
Status:
Article
Title:
CENTERING ON THE GARDEN
Spring must be on its way.
Notice little buds on the bough.
Our snowdrops are through
and daffodils waiting in the wings.
I celebrated at B&Q and
bought a large tray of prims.
Our garden now has pink,
blue and yellow decorated tubs.
I have weeded the winter pansies.
Think they are past their best
But I am prepared to give them
a second chance.
May be there will be a fine display
like the rather battered wallflowers.
Spring is on its way.
Total
Rating 4
Number
of Reviewers 2
Average
Review **
Name:
Marm...
Review: I have come to expect far better from you Sue.
Reads like a spring shopping diary.
Far away and removed from the realms of poetry it is!
Rating:
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Name:
Elaine W
Review: A sweet poem methinks!!
Rating:
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